"though, but" is redundant - that line would sound better as "should create 
this directory, but it won't be available"

"Check if it is enabled" feels a bit clunky, how about "Check that it's 
enabled"?


+ REVISION bump needed.

-- 
  Sent from a phone, apologies for poor formatting.

On 4 November 2024 10:10:28 Raf Czlonka <rczlonka@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hello,
>
> The below diff fixes a couple of typos I found.
>
> Also, I _think_ there's at least one case in the README, where the
> name of the software, rather than the binary/port name should be
> used, i.e.: a case of "Firefox" vs. "${MOZILLA_PROJECT}"; but, after
> going through the file in the CVS, I'm not sure any more. Probably
> best if someone goes through the installed/rendered README, rather
> than the CVS one, and sees if there's any "firefox" that could do
> with capitalising ;^)
>
> Cheers,
>
> Raf
>
> P.S. I'm not subscribed to ports@ mailing list so please CC me if need be.
>
> Index: www/mozilla-firefox/pkg/README
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /cvs/ports/www/mozilla-firefox/pkg/README,v
> diff -u -p -r1.37 README
> --- www/mozilla-firefox/pkg/README 29 Oct 2024 12:40:10 -0000 1.37
> +++ www/mozilla-firefox/pkg/README 4 Nov 2024 10:00:48 -0000
> @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ ${SYSCONFDIR}/${MOZILLA_PROJECT}/{unveil
> As unveil() can't show non-existing dirs, it is recommended to manually
> create ~/Downloads for files to be properly saved in this directory.
>
> -Starting ${MOZILLA_PROJECT} should create this dir though, but it wont be 
> available
> +Starting ${MOZILLA_PROJECT} should create this dir though, but it won't be 
> available
> for downloads until it's restarted.
>
> 3rd-Party MIME Handlers
> @@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ device e.g.:
>
> # chown youruser /dev/video0
>
> -Screen sharing needs shmget() which isnt available when pledge() is active, so
> +Screen sharing needs shmget() which isn't available when pledge() is 
> active, so
> you will have to disable pledge for the main process.
>
> KerberosV support
> @@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ are enabled.
>
> Similarly, the rust-based WebRender compositor can be enabled by setting
> MOZ_WEBRENDER=1 in the environment, or by switching the about:config
> -gfx.webrender.enabled knob to true. Check it is enabled in the 'Features'
> +gfx.webrender.enabled knob to true. Check if it is enabled in the 'Features'
> section of about:support. For this feature, WebGL2 is necessary, so your
> hardware must support at least OpenGL 4.